Leo.EXE

[zero123]

Name: Leo.EXE
Operator:Renel
Age:13
Element:Wind
Description:A very good warrior,Looks cool and he is very fast
Basic attacks:

Burning Blade
180 Damage

Tornado Slicer
200 Damage

Sonic Buster
100 per hit (3 hits)

Blade Beam
140 Damage

Climbhazard
130 Damage

Level 1 500/5000 Exp # of chips:0
Zenny:5000

[NebulaGregarZX]

I applaud your effort, but it needs to be fleshed out a little bit. While usually I'd bother you about stealing Cloud Strife's Limit Breaks for two attacks, I think I'll let it slide.

Here is my list of corrections for your Navi:
-You can only have one Element, sorry. Still, think of it this way: Do you really want to have three weaknesses?
-The Operator is the human character who is in possession of the PET holding the Navi, not you, the user who controls them.
-"A very good warrior" describes the Navi pretty badly. So he's good at fighting, what about his appearance? What does he look like? How does he act?
-The attacks don't have defined ranges. In fact, all they have are names and damage rates. While it should be obvious, you really ought to post their elements, too.
-It's spelled "Climhazard". This spelling hasn't been changed in any media to "Climb Hazard", so I assume the attack is actually named "Climhazard", and it's not an abbreviation.
-In general, you're missing a lot of details. Even if there's nothing to put down (like what chips you have; you don't have any yet) you still need to put that category in.

In short, flesh it out more. Kudos for figuring out how to make your Navi without having to ask around, by the way. Myself aside, everybody else went and asked before actually checking the topics.

EDIT: Well, it's a little better, but the description is still impossibly vague. Describe his appearance and personality.